Thursday, December 12, 2013

In Ms. Ali's post she talks about the current and future effects of the drought that Texas is currently going through. She also touches on the possible ways in which the state of Texas could alleviate the effects of the drought . Overall I agree with Ms. Ali, but I also believe there are certain things she could have done to make her argument stronger.
Her spelling and grammar errors distracted me somewhat from the point of her post. If you want your opinion to be taken seriously, care should be taken to proper grammar and spelling.
When she spoke of the domino effect of the drought, it came across as overly dramatic. Though those things could potentially happen, it wasn't necessary. It would of helped her point to approach it more logically and to propose actions that could help with the issues we are facing now instead of ragging on the worst case scenario.
I did think her focus on resolutions near the end of her post was a good place to end on. Rather then just ranting about the drought issue, she presented feasible ways in which we as Texas residents can help preserve the water that we have. It's important to  take an pro-active stance on dealing with natural resource issues.

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